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30.0 % rate as inclusive
100.0 % rate as OER
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30% rate as inclusive
100% rate as OER

Review by Bielefeld_Inclusion_across_borders

Philosophy

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The material´s set-up is not transparent. Neither in the lesson itself nor on the website are structure

and or design choices being explained or justified. It also does not mention inclusion at all and does

not seem to appeal to an audience with special needs as it does not provide any variety in for example

language complexity levels of the article. Also, none of the tutors introduced seem to have specialised

in special needs teaching.

Nonetheless, the material is structured logically; beginning with a warm-up consisting out of two

questions concerning stress and burn-out, continueing with information on vocabularies that might

be needed to generally be able to talk about burn-out. After that the article with further information

follows and the lessons ends with discussion questions. Each exercise is labelled from 1-4 making it

appear very structured. Still it lacks a wrap-up or reflection on learning process.14

The information provided in the article appears to be common knowledge, however the author of the

article this lesson is based on, H.J. Meech ,is briefly mentioned, though the name and date of the

referenced article are missing.

As this is thought to be used for private English learners with a diverse, international background it is

hard to relate lesson to any curriculum, research results are not explicitly mentioned.

Learners' needs

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The lesson provided by Engoo is on the topic of how to recover from burn out and is supposed to help

students learn how to discuss a topic with the help an English tutor who has to be paid for.

The website provides various topics of discussion organized by topic. However, the lesson at hand is

focused exclusively on curing burn-out allowing for little variation. The lesson and the entire subgroup

of discussions is only offered for intermediate English learners. Adjustments for higher or lower

proficiency would ned to made by the tutor.

Concerning the accessibility of the materials; the free webversion of Engoo does not allow for

downloads meaning that students are reliant on an internet connection. Additionally, the way Engoo

works you are supposed to learn with a tutor you pay for. This is another monetary threshold for

students. Nonetheless, if this (free) lesseon were to be implented in a classroom or in homeschooling

it would provide students with Audio transcriptions and definitions of important vocabulary on the

topic as well as little pictures to indicate what is meant without a teacher being required to be present

(for example for private revisions).

The document does not offer example discussions nor does it provide helpful sentences to improve

ones knowledge of proverbs or idiomatic phrases. This would have to be provided by the tutor. It is

not explained what a discussion really is or how to argue in the first place. The material only provides

questions on the topic which then could be discussed .

Learners’ environment(s)

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The material can best be used in groups or partner work, as it is supposed to teach discussions.

However, one could try themselves at creating arguments based off of the questions provided on the

topic. If working individually though , one has no source of feedback and the student would also lack

an explanation and a definition of what a discussion is. This would also apply for students who´s

teacher/tutor is not present. Otherwise, the material would work just as well in a digitally equipped

classroom as in a long- distance learning scenario.

Allthough Engoo provides materials for private lessons with tutors one could use the presentation as

a base for classroom lesson. The teacher would then have to add additional phrases or function word

(eg. Linking verbs) to accommodate the student´s needs. As the material is designed to be used in a

digital setting it could be used easily in eg. homeschooling during online-classes.

The slides are not available in any other formats than as a part of their website. The free version does

not allow for downloads making students dependant on their internet connection and understanding

of the English language as the website does not offer L1 to L2 (first language to second language)

tutoring. If a student is not proficient enough in Englsih to navigate the website they will not receive

help from the free website.

Learning Feedback for Learners

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The lesson at hand does not provide any feedback on its own. There is no way for students to asses

their progress if they do the lesson on their own. Any feedback will have to be provided by the

teacher/ tutor or possible group members. However, said group members would have to rely on

their intuition as the material does not provide any reference frame in the form of eg. short talks

which then the students could compare themselves to.

One could argue that the warm-up of the lesson (two questions on the world´s most stressfull jobs

and recommendations one would make to a burnt-out friend) could indirectly make students reflect

on their ability to freely answer questions and justify them as justifications are also demanded in the

last part, the discussion part, of the lesson. However, this would be up their subjective interpretation

as they would not have a tutor correcting them. The materal also does not provide information on

Introduction to „learning feedback for learners”:

The material should imply elements of qualitive as well as quantitative

feedback. It should enable self-assessment formats as well as peer-feedback.

Feedback can be designed as immediate learning feedback or as a more broad

reflection on the learners’ progress. The provided feedback elements should

support the learners in reflecting on their learning process in a valuing and

affirmative way. Additionally, feedback options may appoint to next steps in a

learning journey.9

common mistakes in a discussion and also does not provide an example discussion as for example in

the form of a short video. In other words, if the teacher/tutor does not provide the student with

additional information the students will have neither references nor information on how to assess

their discussion skills.

Learners’ Reflections on Learning

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The material lacks any sort of learning strategy justification. The term, concept of and approaches to

discussion are not mentioned or explained. Possible adjustments could be made by teachers/tutors,

Introduction to „learner‘s reflections on learning”:

The material should actively support the learner’s knowledge about different

learning strategies. The learner should be encouraged by the material to try out

different learning strategies and to integrate them into their learning process.

Also, the learner should generally be supported on how to reflect on their

learning process as a whole, regarding their progress, main strengths as well as

weaknesses.10

yet they would have to be created completely from scratch. A Tutor could take a question from the

last part of the material eg.: “You can't do a good job if your job is all you do. - Katie Thurmes. Do you

agree? Why? Why not?“ . The Why/ Why not part indirectly indicates that the students is supposed

to argue pro and cons for their answer. Teachers could supply students with methods of argument

structure and arrangement to create convincing arguments in a discussion.

As mentioned before the material itself does not provide the student with any reference for a

“proper” discussion. If the material is used alone and on in its own without any supervision the

student would not only lack the opportunity to identify their current proficiency state, they would

also lack the opportunity to reflect on their discussion skills development. Nonetheless, the student

is provided with potentially new vocabulary and an article on burn-out which in turn might teach the

student interesting information, which they could compare to their knowledge pre-lecture.

Learners’ Agency

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I gave this criterion a 4 star rating, because eventhough the student is not able to choose a different

topic within the lesson the questions provided concern their private lifes and hobbys, enabling them

to express their interests.

Questions as for example ” What do you find to be the best way to reduce stress? Why?” can be

answered differently and personally by each student. The students are encouraged to reflect on their

own stress coping mechanisms and to think of other solution for decreasing stress. They therfore are

able to decide what exactly they would like to talk about. (Side Note: here, functional vocabulary

concerning hobbies could be useful eg.: vocab-box)

In a one on one session the material might help the tutor/teacher to stick to a rough outline of the

session while they could monitor their student`s progress. The material itself does enable the

student to autonomically handle their learning progress. Because of the codependancy on the

tutor/teacher the student would struggle to identify any progress at all if they were to use the

material on its own.

The students are indirectly encouraged to reflect on the material, or to be more precise to reflect on

the article provided in the lesson beacuse of the discussion questions. Information from the text

concerning a healthy life style and eg. Saying ”no” to certain people and events could be reflected

upon. When answering questions like ” Do you often cook for yourself? If so, what do you like to

make? If not, why not?” the student could answer with ”Sometimes. However, cooking makes me

feel more stressed than before. So, contrary to text cooking healthy meals might increase my

stresslevel and therefore my chance of burn-out”.

The material does not adress diversity in any way. It even assumes that all students who use the

lesson are in fact working. However, given the target group of adult learners, this makes sense.

Moreover, the focus from job-induced burn-out could easily be adapted to burn-out from school

related stress. The lesson does not include any mentions of ethinicity, disability or different socio-

economic backgrounds and only focuses on burn-out caused by jobs. Emotional burn-out is not

mentioned either.

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